This week’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer’s. Story based on the picture prompt… this one by Ady. Thanks Ady!
Harriett
“It’s just a bench, Harriett.”
She clung to my legs, damn near hysterical.
“Daddy, I don’t want to go. There was a girl on the bench, and I don’t like her.”
“There’s no one there. The yard is fenced in. It’s why we bought this place.”
“Please, daddy…”
I squatted down next to her, prying her off me. I pulled her bright red headband out and placed it back, pushing the blonde bangs out of her face.
“Your mom and I have a lot of unpacking to do. We can’t play right now. Go outside. You don’t have to sit on the bench, but you aren’t staying inside.”
To her credit, she didn’t whine or complain; she just turned and marched down the newly stained stairs leading off the deck and into the yard. It was a little chilly, the humidity making the wind sting a bit, but she should be fine.
I put away another glass and then looked out the window, searching for her. I didn’t see her.
I rushed out into the yard, feeling a little bad that I brushed her off.
Her hairband rested carefully on the bench, but my daughter was nowhere to be seen.
Wow eerie. What happened to his daughter? She just disappeared. Poor parents! Great job.
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It must have been the little girl on the bench…
Thanks for reading!
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Oh dear! Her father should have listened to her about the little girl on the bench! Wonderful story, Jon! I hope she comes back soon.
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I hope she’s able to…
Thanks for reading!
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What?
That is one very scary bench.
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You’re telling me…
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Very spooky – nicely done!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Gosh! That was really eerie! Well written! 🙂
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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You have a hauntingly written tale here! I wonder if the ghostly little girl has anything to do with the daughter’s disappearance.
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Thanks. At the very least, I’m sure dad will think so… Especially when he starts seeing echoes of his own daughter in the house…
Thanks for reading!
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That is very creepy, but very well done.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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A wonderfully spooky story, Jon. I feel for her parents. Very nicely done. 🙂
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Very creepy. She had warned her father, but he refused to listen. Great suspense. 🙂
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
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Whoa…*shivers* eerie and wonderfully done. What happened to the little girl? Did she see a ghost? I got goosebumps reading this. Not easy making a spooky story in so few words!
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! I’m not sure what happened to the girl… I wonder if we’ll ever see her again?
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Scary. Nicely written.
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Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome.
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Creepy enough to give me chills! Great job!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
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That is some spooky writing! Well done
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Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Ghoulish? Sometimes kids sense the truth a lot quicker than adults!
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Indeed. Dad should have listened to the kid… Thanks for reading!
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Oh dear! He should have paid attention. What on earth happened to her?
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I don’t know… Poor girl! Thanks for reading!
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My pleasure Jon.
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