This week’s Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer.
Our Table
“BELLEZZA’S AT 7, OUR TABLE. I’LL BE THERE.”
Claire’s heart fluttered as she read it again. She had been seeing George pretty regularly for almost a year… He was perfect. Sweet. Caring. He brought her tulips (her favorite). He read to her. They took a trip to Europe together last fall. He talked to her cats… And no guy had done that before. Perfect.
Would he ask her tonight?
She didn’t really have to consider what her answer would be. Just how she would say it.
She sat at their table in her best evening gown and waited, a place they had only been once before… their first date. She couldn’t believe he still remembered it.
“I told you I’d be here,” she heard George’s voice from behind her. She smiled and rose to her feet, spinning around.
And her heart collapsed back into the chair… to the ground… Six feet under.
George was settling into a table a few feet away with a petite blond with unnaturally large eyes, a pout set on her lips.
“I’m at our table, babe. Didn’t you get my text?”
He invited her to this restaurant where they had their first date and brought another woman? What a cad! Poor thing. I can only imagine how that must have felt! Great story, Jon!
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Yes. Complete scum. I suspect she’ll meet the right person on the way out of the restaurant, but she won’t know it at the time.
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That sounds like a great ending! 😀
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That’s a horrible thing to do to somebody! Great story 🙂
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Yeah, I don’t think he meant for Claire to get that message… But I hope they put too much chili in his dinner, the jerk.
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What a two-faced jerk! She’s better off without him!
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Absolutely. Hers is unfortunately too common a story, but I think it will all turn out for the best! Better, though, that she finds out now rather than after they are married.
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Beautifully written. I love the line “And her heart collapsed back into the chair… to the ground… Six feet under.”
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Thanks. I wasn’t sure if it was a little too over-the-top or not, but I decided to leave it.
Glad you enjoyed it!
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What a cad!! Brilliantly crafted tale
@Samantha/samratkel from
Shadow Realities
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Thanks for reading.
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Wow, he has guts. Nasty, but lovely story! I like it. Thank you.
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Thanks for reading. I don’t think he has guts. A man with guts would have formally broken it off with Claire before he started a new relationship. I think he just screwed up and sent to the wrong person. Thanks for reading!
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I am STUNNED and completely shocked by the turn of events!! My heart breaks for her.
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Indeed. I’m confident she’ll find the right guy. This isn’t where her story ends!
Thanks for reading.
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Glad to hear it! I really enjoyed your story ☺
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What a twist!
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Thanks for reading!
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Of course – you are very welcome 🙂
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Now that fella needs his ear chewed up.
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No doubt. He probably needs more than that! Thanks for reading.
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